The class make improvements to the story by replacing names with pronouns.
Extension activity
Ask the class to write about a friend or relative. Give clear ideas about what they should include in their writing, for example:
- appearance
- hobbies
- friends
- personality
- likes and dislikes
They should use the person's name as little as possible but make sure that the writing still makes sense.
Plenary
Recap on the main teaching points and children present their descriptive writing.
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Worksheet: Moody makeover for Will
